A writing about the median sternotomy, one of the most common ways of accessing the heart for open heart or chest surgery. One paragraph uses technical jargon without consideration of being understandable–only specificity. The other uses common language.… Read More


Hello, I am Raymond Tu. I’m in my second semester here at CCNY and am studying mechanical engineering. I am confident in my ability to analyze information and synthesize arguments from sources. One thing I’d like to improve is my tone, making it sound more fluid and harmonious. I like cats, playing games with friends,… Read More